Bottom line
A borrower explicitly requests refinance analysis and a licensed owner approves a complete current illustrative comparison.
Best for
Borrowers who explicitly requested a complete refinance analysis.
Use when
Send after assumptions, terms, disclosures, and comparison methodology are reviewed.
Watch for
Mass equity or rate solicitations without borrower request.
How to Use This Email
When to use this
A borrower explicitly requests refinance analysis and a licensed owner approves a complete current illustrative comparison.
What’s on their mind
The borrower wants to know whether refinancing helps their goal but distrusts low-payment pitches that omit costs, term reset, and break-even assumptions.
What this email should do
Invite a borrower to review a complete refinance scenario without claiming guaranteed savings or approval.
Best sender
Loan officer
Read the Finished Email
Review the message as a recipient would see it. The names and business details are fictional.
Subject
Review a refinance scenario—not a loan offerHello Jordan,
You asked the current details to review whether refinancing might fit the current details. A current illustrative comparison is available at https://example.com/next-step using assumptions dated October 14.
- Material and tradeoff: the current details
This is not a Loan Estimate, rate lock, approval, commitment, tax advice, or guarantee of savings. A lower rate or payment does not by itself establish lower total cost, and terms may change after verification and application.
Book the current details at https://example.com/next-step to verify assumptions and compare alternatives, or reply “close refinance review.” Do not email statements or financial records; use https://example.com/next-step if requested.
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Template to copy
Subject
Review a refinance scenario—not a loan offerHello [Borrower first name],
You asked [Brokerage name] to review whether refinancing might fit [Stated goal]. A current illustrative comparison is available at [Secure comparison link] using assumptions dated [Assumption date].
- Material and tradeoff: [Material tradeoff]
This is not a Loan Estimate, rate lock, approval, commitment, tax advice, or guarantee of savings. A lower rate or payment does not by itself establish lower total cost, and terms may change after verification and application.
Book [Loan officer name] at [Meeting link] to verify assumptions and compare alternatives, or reply “close refinance review.” Do not email statements or financial records; use [Secure upload link] if requested.
[Loan officer name]
[Brokerage name]
[Nmls information]
Subject Line Variations
- Review a refinance scenario—not a loan offer
Status-precise control without teaser rate or approval language.
- Compare the full refinance economics
Alternative emphasizing the secure decision task.
- Current assumptions for your refinance question
Alternative for an established borrower conversation.
Best for
- Borrowers who explicitly requested a complete refinance analysis.
- Licensed teams with versioned total-cost comparisons.
Don’t send this if
- Mass equity or rate solicitations without borrower request.
- Hardship or foreclosure situations requiring servicing or housing-counseling pathways.
When to Send It
Trigger
A borrower explicitly requests refinance analysis and a licensed owner approves a complete current illustrative comparison.
Timing
Send after assumptions, terms, disclosures, and comparison methodology are reviewed.
Frequency
Send once per comparison version; new market or borrower facts require a new version.
Timing note
Credit decisions, adverse action, fair lending, fraud, hardship, servicing, and legal issues must leave marketing automation for the governed process.
Make This Email Yours
- Use the borrower's stated goal and verified current-loan inputs.
- Show total costs, term effects, and break-even method—not only payment.
- Timestamp all market and borrower assumptions.
Before You Use This Email
Why This Approach Works
Platform Setup Steps
Trigger
A borrower explicitly requests refinance analysis and a licensed owner approves a complete current illustrative comparison.
Segment
Borrowers who explicitly requested refinance review and have a current complete scenario, excluding adverse action, disputes, hardship servicing matters, opt-outs, and stale data.
Delay
Send after assumptions, terms, disclosures, and comparison methodology are reviewed.
Reply owner: Licensed originator responsible for scenario accuracy, advertising disclosures, borrower assumptions, and fair-lending treatment.
- Verify borrower request, existing-loan inputs, new scenario terms, total costs, term, break-even method, and disclosures.
- Insert secure comparison, date, material tradeoff, and no-offer/no-savings boundaries.
- Send once and route application, tax, servicing, hardship, and comparison questions appropriately.
Stop conditions
- Stop on reply, close review, application, lock, withdrawal, opt-out, stale assumptions, or staff contact.
- Stop if rates, APR, points, fees, loan balance, goals, or property facts change.
- Stop automation on hardship, foreclosure, servicing disputes, adverse action, complaints, or legal/tax questions.
Mistakes To Avoid
- Selling only the monthly-payment drop
A longer term or added costs may increase total expense.
Use instead: Compare full economics and time horizon.
- Calling an illustration an offer
Verification, application, and official disclosures remain.
Use instead: Label the scenario and its assumptions precisely.
Sequence Placement
Use once after approval of a complete comparison version. A borrower discussion may enter application; close ends review; changed assumptions require a new version.
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